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CND Storyline Chapter 3x: A new ennemy
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06:10 on July 21, 2010
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This part of the story will be told by that new ennemy.
It was a calm day in Mario World. Goombas were getting stomped on by Mario, Koopas were rolling and... a Tanooki was all alone. It had lost its family when trying to defend Bowser. He had been serving for three years tomorrow. He was only seeking one thing: revenge. He wanted revenge on the person destroyed its family just for saving a princess: Mario. That Mario... always thinking he's a great hero for always saving Princess Peach but did he see how many persons he killed just to save her once?! I hated him. Now, returning at my day, I saw a new paper on the sign. It was written: You hate Mario? You hate heroes? Join now Willeyd's evil army the future conqueror of the world! Cookies included.
???: Cool! I can get revenge on Mario and have cookies! Now, where is it?
World 67: Password: editing
???: Okay then.
???:/edit editing
I then entered the world.
It was a big castle. Even Hyrule and Peach's castle put together looked small compared to it. Guards were blocking the entrance.
Guard#1: hey, you, what are you doing here?
???: I want to join the army.
Guard#1: Okay, but you have to pass 2 tests. I am the one who gives the first test.
???: What is it?
Guard#1: You must answer to all 5 questions.
???: Okay, bring it on!
Guard#1: First, what is your name?
???: Rilez.
Guard#1: Why do you want to join the army?
Rilez: Revenge...
Guard#1: Okay... Third, how will you contribute to the army?
Rilez: I'm quick and I know Bowser well.
Guard#1: Okay, Fourth, what will you do if someone wants that you talk?
Rilez: Die!
Guard#1: Perfect, finally, what will you do with cookies?
Rilez: Eat them!
Guard#1: Congratulations! You passed the first test. Now you must defeat the other guard with me.
Rilez: I won't. I'm not defeating people in the same army that I am!
Guard#2: Congratulations! That is the real way to solve the 2nd test.
Rilez: Really? Cool!
Guard#2: Now, follow me. The superiors will initiate you.
Rilez: Really? Awesome!
I then walked in corridors, guided by these two guards that were escorting me. For once, I didn't feel like a miserable tanooki. I felt that I was someone important.
Guard#1: Now, enter and feel honored to meet them.
Rilez: Okay!
???: Welcome, little tanooki.
Rilez: umm... Thank... You...
That guy was looking dangerous. He was tall, brown hair, grey eyes, wore blood red pants and shirt and wore long black cloak. He was sitting on a black throne. But what caught my attention was that big scar on his left eye.
???: I am Willeyd!
James35: Okay Will, now he knows, you're not obligated to do your 3 hours description of yourself. I'm James.
That guy was looking more sympatic. he had blonde hair and green eyes. He wasn't looking as sadistic as Will. He even looked sorry for me. He was wearing a black jacket and jeans.
James35: and these two are Nobelar and... actually, no one knows his real name so people call him the blank guy.
Nobelar: ...
: Okay, so? What now?
James35: Ask Will, not me.
Willeyd: Okay, little tanooki...
Rilez: I have a name and it's Rilez!
James35: No! Stop provoking Will!
Willeyd: Too late. May the eternal darkness consume and curse for all his life and his afterlife in the underworld.
I didn't what was happening but I felt more calm. Less heavy. Then I tried to say WTF but I couldn't do anything. I couldn't open my mouth nor make a sound.
Willeyd: Now, Shadow tanooki, take Bowser here so we can speak with him.
I then walked away in Mario World. I then saw a Goomba and a Koopa. My two best friend: Leo and Marth. I then jumped jumped on them without even controlling myself. My possessed self killed my two best friends. Now, I will avenge my family AND my friends. I will defeat Willeyd and Mario no matter what. I kept running to Bowser's castle until I heard:
???: Stop! Turn around and defeat me like a man, Possessed Tanooki.
My possessed self turned around saw...
To be continued...
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Re: CND Storyline Chapter 3x: A new ennemy
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07:25 on July 21, 2010
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Cool! I liked the descriptions of the bad guys.
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07:27 on July 21, 2010
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Cool! I'm going to make a story, its a random one and its continued from tmy old stories.
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20:34 on July 21, 2010
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Hmmm.... I dont know... Pretty good.
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10:48 on July 22, 2010
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man this place really helps me with new approaches to literature sometimes. Nice work all in all! (better than most of my crap anyway)
In which case you were reading my signature.
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11:03 on July 22, 2010
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17:55 on July 23, 2010
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I know! Maybe you could try to make one of the good guys get brainwashed into joining willeyd's side or something like that, if you want.
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20:55 on July 24, 2010
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if we use absents idea i dont want it to be me! Im to cmart for them to brainwash me
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06:29 on July 25, 2010
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12:16 on July 26, 2010
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*smart
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12:46 on Aug 02, 2010
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14:56 on Aug 02, 2010
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16:40 on Aug 02, 2010
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Will rilez become good after a while or be bad forever?
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17:12 on Aug 02, 2010
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Originally Posted by sponge7325:
"Will rilez become good after a while or be bad forever?"
Well...I PMed JeanMarc about myself being in the storyline, and it said that I eventaully become good, although, to the rest of the team, I'm pretty shady.
JeanMarc made my character pretty identical to my PM, so I'm probably right.
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18:18 on Aug 02, 2010
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I understand the shady types. mabey we can go on a mission together in the story!
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08:09 on Aug 11, 2010
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09:12 on Aug 11, 2010
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Originally Posted by rilezTNUKI:
"Originally Posted by sponge7325:
"I understand the shady types. mabey we can go on a mission together in the story!"
Good idea. You DID help me get the Chocobo Egg when I was still new to the game, so maybe we could do that?"
If you're talking about the story, then you can't get the chocobo egg, cause I think I was already assigned to get it.
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07:03 on Aug 13, 2010
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Originally Posted by Absent0:
"Originally Posted by rilezTNUKI:
"Originally Posted by sponge7325:
"I understand the shady types. mabey we can go on a mission together in the story!"
Good idea. You DID help me get the Chocobo Egg when I was still new to the game, so maybe we could do that?"
If you're talking about the story, then you can't get the chocobo egg, cause I think I was already assigned to get it."
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